Oh my gods!!! I LOVE Malcolm so much! He is such cocky little flirt and that boy has skills. He is soooo smooth that I can see Leandra blushing like crazy and Malcolm just being Malcolm. My favorite part of this chapter is surprisingly about Carver. I love the backstory and the history you've included in Malcolm and Carver's relationship. It feels so real and authentic and it made me a little tearful because Malcolm must have really loved and respected him to name is his son Carver. I just can't, all the details you've included in this chapter is so rich with detail and really creates a character-driven story. I love it.
Now back to my flirty-man ... Oh my gods, the temptation to not kiss the man. I mean, when he asked her for a kiss, I almost just died. Of course, he would ask her, of course, he would challenge her like that. Of course, he would try to make her break the rules. He is sooo bad and I love him.
Lol your comment made me giggle in delight. Yes Malcolm is a rascal and he loves trying to find ways to make Leandra blush.
And yes I love Carver the Hawke so when we find out there was another Carver he was named for I had so many headcanons of what that could look like. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and Malcolm.
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