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  1. Mystral on Chapter 2 Wed 31 Mar 2021 07:44PM UTC

    Hi! So, your story looks promising and I'll keep reading it for sure :) But I figured I could also add that if you need a beta, I'd be willing to do so, even if it would be the first time I'd do that, but it's totally fine if you're not interested, too, don't worry :)

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    1. SlytherinsPurpleHat on Chapter 2 Fri 02 Apr 2021 08:08AM UTC

      Thank you for the offer, I do already have a beta reader, but I would be more than welcome to have a second one! Even between the two of us we don't pick up all the mistakes, as for me, English is not the only langue I speak every day, I'm bilingual, and learning a third language, and my beta is not a native English speaker despite her English being better than mine😂

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      1. Mystral on Chapter 2 Fri 02 Apr 2021 12:35PM UTC

        My native language is actually French, but still, I often am told I'm pretty good. I said this because I did notice a few mistakes/some words were missing in the first few chapters tooXD It totally happen and I know that, but sometimes even two sets of eyes can't catch everything, after all. It's all up to you tho darling

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        1. SlytherinsPurpleHat on Chapter 2 Fri 02 Apr 2021 03:11PM UTC

          Ahh, those first few chapters have been the bane of my existence. I didn't have a beta reader then and have been dreading going over them. I'm more than happy to have a second beta reader, I am a bit slow on updates right now, because I started university 3 weeks ago, and I've been settling into everything, but I should be, hopefully, uploading faster soon.
          French is a pretty cool language, I had the opportunity to learn it at high school, but I went with music history and theory instead.
          If you want to talk about this more my email is [email protected].

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