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  1. I missed a chapter!
    Love the building up and how the information is given. It feels very natural, not hurried. I'm so impressed with the pace <3
    Hitoshi did a good job finding the articles lol :D I like how you use parts and pieces from the manga in the story, like Kai beyblading with his father, with all consequences.

    Interesting how Mariam shows up, I'm curious what her role in the story will be.

    Thanks for sharing!

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