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1. terrible_titles on Chapter 1 Sun 11 Apr 2021 11:22PM UTC

   

   This is so heart-wrenching, and I love how altering Tim and Jon's relationship means Tim's death is, while still devastating, somewhat less bleak--as it protects Jon from the coma and having to make "the decision", at least for now. Just a subtle shift, but one that leaves a lasting mark. The opening and closing statements are really well done. Thank you for sharing!

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2. 1. journalofimprobablethings on Chapter 1 Tue 13 Apr 2021 10:18PM UTC

      

      Thank you!! And yes, the angst is all well and good but I really wanted their connection to have some sort of positive effect as well. Having them both end up in the same places they did in canon just felt...way too sad. I am so glad you liked it! <3

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   2. Anuisthechosenone on Chapter 1 Sat 26 Feb 2022 01:30PM UTC

      

      :')

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   3. 1. journalofimprobablethings on Chapter 1 Thu 21 Apr 2022 05:31AM UTC

         

         <3

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