Well that was terribly dark but done so well. I can picture not only the scenery but feel the utter helplessness that Karen feels in this dark world. Great job!
Oh my goodness, thank you for being the first comment on this second chapter, I means a lot; especially because this was such an experimental idea. I enjoyed the general theme of the first chapter but really wanted to explore things from Karen’s perspective, so I’m glad you got a good feeling of her helplessness. It broke my heart to write Clark this way, but it was also really interesting as well.
Again, thank you kindly for the sweet words and support.
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