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  1. KingOfBuggs on Chapter 21 Sat 29 May 2021 03:21PM UTC

    Oh the FEAR I felt with Xerx throwing a spell at Magna- but the clench from Magna’s acceptance of death was SO MUCH WORSE. But oh I’m so glad Xerx is leaving. For good this time. Highkey hope he falls down a flight of stairs.
    And FINRAL. And Magna and Luck and Vice-Captain Grumpy. I’m in love with all of them. I still adore how Magna calls the incident the time “Langris lost a fight with a rock fall.” And DJDHDHSJDJHD “KIND OF ANGRY HORSE SQUAD.” You never cease to make me laugh with all the little jokes tucked inside your writing.
    As I always say, thank you, greatly, for the story <3

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    1. eclipsingbinary on Chapter 21 Sun 30 May 2021 07:28PM UTC

      Finral writing

      Poor Magna. Yep. He was ready to die at Xerx's hand - as if *any* of the Bulls would have let that happen. Finral's the quickest to respond but he wouldn't have been the only one. Magna's right about Judith. She had no regrets at all when Xerx killed her, because she knew that she saved her boys.

      I don't think Langris and William are going to be gentle with him at all. There will be many 'unintentional' stumbles, I'm sure.

      Finral finally gets his voice and his words back. I think Magna will call it that forever, probably to the point that Yami, William and Finral do too. I suspect that Langris might do too. Ha, I'm glad you liked the angry horse squad. I had to squint at the emblem to work it out.

      And you are welcome. I'm so glad that you are still enjoying it. Nearly at the end now.

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