Well fuck me sideways, I was not prepared for how much I loved this dynamic. Evil!Martin rights!! And if you ever write sequel, please know I will implode, becuase this is soo good!!! I was a bit worried with the non-con tag, but its definitely more dub-con and you set that up really well. I honestly don't think if deserve the warning, but obviously its up to yourself, and it's always best to err on the side of caution :)
But this dynamic is so good, and I can just imagine a similar thing going on with Jon as a parallel, where he has acknowledged in his own mind how he wants to keep Martin safe (but hasn't told him, becuase Gay Panic), and he'll use that to rationalise why that extends to Elias. That's all there is, definitely no attraction, nope, no way, no siree. And then maybe he walks in on Martin, covered in blood, and Elias, rewarding him with praise, similar to this chapter but with a familiarity that you know this has happened before, and Jon immediately realises that (1)Martin has killed before, (2)it was FOR HIM, and (3)that the sight of both him and Elias is very hot. Que a very unhealthy polycule of murders and monsters, each making eachother worse, but they have never felt better.
Honestly there's just such potential and i love it ❤ You really did a great job with this one, it's a hardline to walk, especially when Martin is not in the right mind for consent, but its great, and not triggering for me (yeah!) , and I thought this was a really interesting dynamic :) Have a lovely day
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TheCoolestBowtie Sun 06 Jun 2021 10:57AM UTC
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