The characterization in this chapter is so rich and beautiful. You give just enough detail without bogging the narrative down. I especially like the way that you wove Peter in, with how he liked to make Sirius laugh, and how the map was originally his idea. I can totally see that, and portrayals of Peter that show him as a true Marauder are always a big win with me. :D
(As a truly bizarre aside, we have somehow same-brained on Sirius' flavor preferences??? I am just absolutely thrilled at that little detail!)
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Lunatik_Pandora on Chapter 5 Tue 13 Jul 2021 09:35PM UTC
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