Comment on Touch

  1. Miss Anon (Guest) on Chapter 1 Wed 02 Dec 2015 05:15PM UTC

    This is such an interesting concept. It's both intriguing and heartbreaking having two victims in this. Both unable to control their actions. But it is so good. I find myself eagerly waiting the next chapter.

    And as for this one, well let me just say, it was brilliant. From the detail of the emotional turmoil to the dialogue. Everything had me awaiting the next sentence! And it's not as though I personally enjoy reading someone going through such devastation. No, but it's how YOU did it. Whirl DID NOT WANT IT. You've made it very clear that Whirl was driven by coding, so this wasn't planned nor did he find pleasure taking advantage of someone helpless. And that's what draws me in. What makes me curious. Why I have to know.

    How is this going to play out? How is Swerve going to react? What will happen to Whirl? Is Perceptor in this story? AND WHY FOR THE LOVE OF PRIMUS DID WING HAVE TO DIE!?... I got a little carried away there, ignore me... He he! ( ^ v ^ )

    Anyways, I can go on and on. You are absolutely brilliant for coming up with such an awesome concept. I love how it's playing out so far, I hope it's gets better for both Whirl and Swerve. This just the sort of thing I enjoy. Hopefully this all ends well... I'm partial to happy endings... Keep up the great work!

    Comment Actions

    1. Drazyrohk on Chapter 1 Wed 02 Dec 2015 09:37PM UTC

      Thank you so very much!

      ^/////^

      I'm honestly overwhelmed and don't know what to say! I'm so pleased you read this and enjoyed it so much. I would hate to leave these characters in this situation and thus I am working on continuing and reaching an eventual conclusion.

      Every time I read the note Whirl sent to Rung, my heart bleeds. It's hard to do this to characters I love, but I'm also partial to happy endings, so we shall see where this all leads!

      Comment Actions

      1. Miss Anon (Guest) on Chapter 1 Wed 02 Dec 2015 11:23PM UTC

        Oh you're welcome! This is amazing story and I ALWAYS get excited when I read a good story. I look forward to reading this to the end.

        And take your time. As excited as we all are I would hate to rush you. So take it easy.

        And that note was amazing!! I felt my anxiety working overtime! But in a good way!... I think... Oh I don't know! Oh, and I especially loved pretty much the entire scene in swerve's room. From the moment Rung sees Whirl rocking saying he'd kill him to where Whirl is confused about how he feels for Swerve. Awe poor sweetie... Whenever he started feeding Swerve my heart just POP! Agh! Everything! I loved everything!

        You're really good at this! Look at how I'm just tripping over myself! Ha ha ha!

        Comment Actions