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  1. “that doesn't mean their problems are over”

    Damnit. I knew it seemed too easy, getting him to consent to going home with them.

     

    Nicely written!

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    1. Sören in Van Gogh's "Starry Night"

      Yup. There's 14 more chapters to go (per the current version of my outline) and it's not going to be just fluff or porn.

      Like I said though, I can promise he stays with them. You get a happy ending, they just have to work for it a bit.

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    2. Sören in Van Gogh's "Starry Night"

      Also thank you. This chapter took soooooo looooonnnng, in part because I needed to take breaks from the emotional overload. I'm glad it didn't suck 😂

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      1. I really liked the part where “Mark” was pausing when Anthony needed to rest, even though he didn’t seem to be paying attention. The fact that he still cares is quite evident. Maybe not to Anthony, but to anyone who is paying attention, it’s there.

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        1. Sören in Van Gogh's "Starry Night"

          Thank you for noticing that!

          It's almost like Maglor still has feelings for him or something

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