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  1. kigamin on Chapter 1 Thu 10 Dec 2015 11:07PM UTC

    WHEN WAS THE LAST TIME I LAUGHED SO MUCH AND SO HARD IN A ROW. I DONT KNOW BUT I DO KNOW ONE THING: THIS IS GOLD.

    Okay on to the actual comment. I LOVED how witty it was. It's like. Like. If Wit had a physical form, it would be this fic. It's so full of snark and so funny in the best way, I had to wipe away the tears from laughing too hard. It was just hilarious.

    NOW I know you want to know more than just how hard I laughed (AND I LAUGHED A LOT good thing my roommate isn't home) so ON TO MORE PRACTICAL MATTERS (the kind of things all fic authors want to read). First of all, your characterization is ON POINT. Oikawa sounds like the lil shit he's supposed to be, with all these smug jokes (even that ~ is on point to be honest) and Iwaizumi was totally himself, grumpy and getting annoyed at Oikawa and everything ("and everything" wow I'm such an eloquent person). ALSO I really liked how Iwaizumi made that mom joke first (not just because it's hilarious and I love dirty jokes), for some reason it suits him so well? It was "abrupt" in a good way, as in, the kind of things Iwaizumi would say (because they shock and they're not sugar-coated and okay I'm sorry for my poor attempt at making a constructive comment jhejh)
    Oh! Also!!! It's the kind of situation I as a reader can relate to, so it makes me feel closer to the characters. I really like it when authors slip in relatable content! Even just the concept of a texting fic AU is so cool, because we all text so we all understand to some extent (and speak like that too). In a way, it makes the characters even more real and human (I sound like an English teacher, I'm sorry).

    Okay last but not least, I love when AU authors slip in tiny references to the canon like, here, "Iwa-chan" or "Annoying Shit" (or Ushijima being an arrogant ass lmao). Usually I feel the fan within me point at the reference and yell "YES! YES! YESSS!"

    SO YES IVE RAMBLED ENOUGH!! I LOVED THIS THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS JEWEL <333

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    1. meruemsthighs on Chapter 1 Fri 11 Dec 2015 04:21AM UTC

      OH MY GOD THANK YOU!!!!
      "If wit had a physical form, it would be this fic" oh my god. I need to sit down.

      Thank you and please continue with the english teacherness I love it I love this comment thank you so much!!! <3

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