"the very obvious gay position they were in—he didn’t exactly have his priorities straight)." PLEASE YOU ARE SO FUNNY this whole thing was so funny honestly. you did a great job of characterizing their relationship as well as the social environment. i'm trying not to sound like an english teacher lmao but those are just the things i notice as a writer too so forgive me😭 also i wonder who was the suspended person hmm 🤔 excited for the rest but not really those tags are a little scary idk but still excited !!!
SKSJJS THANK YOU SO MUCH i love being called funny😩✋
AND AHHH don’t WORRYYY, i love it when people go english teacher mode on my writing, it’s just wonderful to have someone analyse and criticise my work. AND THANK YOU SO MUCHHHHH THAT MAKES ME FEEL SO MUCH BETTER AND MORE CONFIDENT <333
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