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  1. RebelPaisley on Chapter 3 Tue 14 Sep 2021 10:36PM UTC

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    I think this is the only time I have this particular compulsion come into play, but it was how I justified the healing cream he tried using back in Mal's story.

    'but then the story would be over, so, meh. ' - this literally made me cackle. Because it would be far too easy if they actually sat down and *communicated*, what nonsense is that? ;D

    What's more dramatic than being left once? Being left *twice*. It was already a soap opera so I figured I may as well indulge every dumb whim I had ;) It would have made more sense if they'd taken two limos, with each group assuming he was with the other, but that didn't occur to me until way after the fact.

    This was one of the ones that sort of ached to write. It's just constant low points and miscommunications that allow those low points to perpetuate, though I try to make up for it with the rest of the story :)

    Thanks for the feedback!! The support is greatly appreciated, and I hope you got some good chocolate! :D

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    1. GoddessMillenia on Chapter 3 Wed 15 Sep 2021 03:31AM UTC

      Spot on, with the healing cream.

      Such open communication does put a damper on all the best plotlines...

      Oh no, it's even better that there was only one limo. They were all just that dumb.

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