Also, to add to this: good job introducing us to the setting! it's clear how much Nightmare has grown to care for his rag-tag family. You also show how much further along he is with dealing with what has happened to him. So I'm very curious to see what the reactions will be to little Dreams! How will the rest of the family react to someone from his past that Nightmare dearly cares about? How will Nightmare react, considering how much old feelings Dreams will stir up with his presence alone? Just, I can't wait to read more :D
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