Pretty good compared to the original, better written, and far better flow to it, and Trawn is better portrayed in my opinion. Doing a good job so far, what recommend is to focus on quality rather than quantity, having this story be a slow burn. As Thrawn!Taylor would focus on a clean elimination of threats to Brockton, don't have her go guns blazing soon, once she has a firm grip on Brockton at least, with her already dismantling a gang through subterfuge. Overall good work so far, keep it up, love to see where you take this story.
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Archivist_Grim on Chapter 4 Wed 29 Sep 2021 04:07AM UTC
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