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  1. Peake_The_Cat on Chapter 1 Mon 01 Nov 2021 05:40AM UTC

    I'm a fan of the corruptionkibble story too, so I'm curious to see where you take this.

    You've got some spelling errors and a few strange sentences, but it's pretty solid overall.

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    1. FollowingMuscle75 on Chapter 1 Mon 01 Nov 2021 10:30PM UTC

      I ran it through the grammarly app you described, or at least i think you did, in my other story.

      Did it fix the issues here?

      If it did then i am gonna throw my entire other story through it to the point we have right now.

      Last Edited Mon 01 Nov 2021 10:33PM UTC

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      1. Peake_The_Cat on Chapter 1 Tue 02 Nov 2021 01:58AM UTC

        I don't remember describing an app, but I have a pretty bad memory, lol.

        It looks pretty good on grammar and spelling now, though it's got a few noticeable quirks left over from machine editing. For example at one point you call the Sirens "Extracurricular" instead of "Extraterrestrial"

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        1. FollowingMuscle75 on Chapter 1 Tue 02 Nov 2021 04:01AM UTC

          Ohh, well the app does have some problems but i can fix those

          Plus some minor issues like a missing space behind a comma isn't too bad

          Last Edited Tue 02 Nov 2021 06:20AM UTC

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        2. FollowingMuscle75 on Chapter 1 Tue 02 Nov 2021 06:56AM UTC

          One major issue is that the app wants to say the observer which would be true in any other case but since its her name and not her title or job it is false

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