Very fun chapter. Not including Mara would have been weird in a story like this. Crow has been infected in his own way and that's good. Is the final piece with Ann interesting and is it about the past or parallel universe? If you would include something like an alternate universe just for them and leaving Sumire in the main piece I am more than happy. Just a small piece at the end of the chapters is enough where you also carry on the story of Ann and Ren.
I made this as an incident that happened in the past, in an alternate universe where they're together it'd go exactly as it did in the game. I hope this was enough to fill your Ren/Ann shipping heart, as I don't have many scenarios that are too interesting for the fic. Glad you enjoyed these short bits!
Well if you want to use the tips I wrote to you in chapter four, that's fine for me. You don't need to continue with their story if you are having trouble and it slows you down on writing. I proposed the couple mainly because in chapter one you say that there may be requests. With Haru interested in Akechi (she is my third favorite for Ren after Ann and Sumire), the only suitable alternative in such a story is Ann or at least in my opinion.
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