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  1. Zaceria on Chapter 4 Thu 02 Dec 2021 12:15AM UTC

    I got into this story because of the snake. Always a fan of stories where girls are forced to fight and endure sensations caused by parasitic creatures.

    But her transformation was fully complete in chapter 1, resistance gone, and the parasitic elements are hardly mentioned.
    I was hoping for a snake pregnancy or her trying to help the snake infect other girls, maybe with it’s newly sired offspring.

    Maybe have the next chapter be her having to deal with being isolated and confined by a female officer?

    That’s my 2 cents. ;)

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    1. Anonymous Creator on Chapter 4 Thu 02 Dec 2021 12:18AM UTC

      Don't worry i'm fully planning on things like that in the future

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