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  1. Planetsoobin on Chapter 2 Wed 05 Jan 2022 02:35AM UTC

    OH NOOO NOT ANOTHER PUNISHMENT FOR BEOMSIE MY POOR HEART :O
    this chapter was soo soo great! i really love the realistic touch of needing some time for healing :D we discussed how in fiction it’s totally forgivable to make things unrealistic but your take on making this story as realistic and detailed as possible is so fitting abd satisfying. ohhh my heart aches for Gyu THE BOY IS CONFUSION and me is confusion too! that scene where he meets other boys from harem for the first time… I pictured it so vividly cause if I were Gyu I’d be soooo angry and sad too ! not understanding what others are saying is like a living hell for me. I’m really curious if gyu won’t be able to understand the word everybody’s saying till the very end of this work!
    Ahhh finally kai kamal is here in his glory 😍 this man was born to be royalty so I can picture him as one sooo easily :D getting a head in front of other boys… my voyeur ass is so happy :D scenes of sex in front of others is my hidden passion (maybe not so hidden since you heard the giant squid and the beach accident). so far so sexy.
    also yeah beomsie misses sabina and I miss sabina too. hope she’s alive and maybe sucks some cocks too 🤧 but she’s probably getting bitten just like Beomsie 🥲 cruel but sexy world.
    cant wait for the next chapter :D hehe hope my comment will be first TT

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    1. fenhongse on Chapter 2 Mon 17 Jan 2022 05:19PM UTC

      I almost deleted the last part where he tries to run away but then I was like..........no he deserves to be punished again 😈😈😈😈 I love punishing him you know I want to see him CRY. Also in the first draft Kai fucked Tae in front of Beomgyu instead of just making him suck the dick 🙏🙏 and that was why lil beomgyu got spooked and ran away uwu. Tbh Beomgyu gives such concubine vibes IT'S UNREAL there need to be more fics of him getting fucked by a king/pharaoh/emperor/SOMEONE. So deserved.

      "if I were Gyu I’d be soooo angry and sad too ! not understanding what others are saying is like a living hell for me" PLEASE I KNOWW RIGHT. Beomgyu not knowing the language anyone speaks makes it hard to write the fic because he can't communicate with anyone, which means it's really hard to develop any relationship and he also has no idea what is happening and CAN'T BE TOLD. At some point my boy Beomgyu is definitely gonna need to learn Greek soon or else he will forever be confused AND ANGRY I just know my boy is headed to a breakdown and temper tantrum LIKE I'm ready for him to start stomping his feet whenever people start talking to him 😡😡😡

      I have a love/hate relationship with voyeur scenes 🤔🤔 I think that I'm more on the side of like...somebody accidentally finding out that you got fucked good after the fact (like a limp, a hickey, or bj lips LMAO) but the idea of someone watching me get fucked, I don't think I could do it jgnkf someone as beautiful as our Beomgyu could though 🤔🤔 I know that boy does not have a bad angle 🙏🙏🙏 I still haven't decided how much voyeur stuff I am gonna put in here but there will definitely be MORE where this came from uwu

      Sabina will come back and I can't wait for it because he is too sexy to die 😋😋 and that is all that matters in this world!

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