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  1. Effect7 (Guest) on Chapter 4 Fri 14 Jan 2022 09:50PM UTC

    That was quick. Thank you for accepting my request and it was quite a fun read.

    I do feel like I have a new request but I feel like it could be something that could be written a little later but idk how it would go about but an universe where instead of faking her death, PD continue to try to convince the diamonds but ultimately get whited like her old pearl? I don't know how this would play out but it was something on my mind with PD with a an downer ending.

    If not maybe an AU where Connie was taken to homeworld with Lars and Steven?

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    1. Peridawesome on Chapter 4 Sat 15 Jan 2022 03:44AM UTC

      Thanks for enjoying! Part of me was worried it got a bit convoluted with the journeying through human history, but I figured that if Amethyst never got with the Crystal Gems she'd eventually set out to explore on her own, and not being saddled with the role of being the big sis would really alter her life trajectory.

      I did think about writing an AU where Pink never ends up resorting to shapeshifting and tries to start an uprising as herself- convincing those in her colony to protect the Earth- and I imagine that there is a real possibility of Pink getting whited when the war comes to a head, so that's not a bad idea.

      Oh, and I like that- Steven not breaking his promise, with them being Stevonnie when they ultimately decide to give themselves up to Homeworld. I am absolutely noting that down! (I do tend to prioritize the one sfrom different people, just for variety's sake, but still, I will do this down the line)

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      1. Effect7 (Guest) on Chapter 4 Sat 15 Jan 2022 04:44AM UTC

        on the PD idea, I was not thinking like that with PD starting the war as herself since I do think the diamonds (yellow and blue more specifically) would have stopped her immediately but I still do see her getting whited as punishment for what she did and to make things even a bit more downery, white one of her eyes is still pink with the implication that she is aware but cannot speak or control herself.

        idk, the idea of PD's punishment is getting whited but is aware of what's Happening and forced to watch b
        earth getting colonized sounds interesting and Messed up that I kind of want to see it play Out in fanfic format.

        on the AU with Connie going to homeworld with Steven and Lars, I do feel like that could work. To make things potentially more different, Connie dies instead of Lars and obviously gets revived or both of them die then get revived?? idk, it's something at least

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        1. Peridawesome on Chapter 4 Sat 15 Jan 2022 03:36PM UTC

          Ah, gotcha. So the idea is specifically "Pink never fakes her shattering" and that leads to her being whited? I can see that, although it feels a bit too pre-planned out.

          And yeah, the addition of Connie may go differently, especially if it happens because of Stevonnie. Although if both are revived with Pink Powers then at least one of them would be able to get back and then Steven has an extra pink portal!

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          1. Effect7 (Guest) on Chapter 4 Sat 15 Jan 2022 05:41PM UTC

            I guess that's the idea but I think I'll be all right with whatever you thought about the idea and I do kind of thing you could do a bit more then what I was thinking about.

            and true. It does make me kind of curious when it comes to Connie's parents and i doubt they'll take the news very well and maybe this AU version of Future, steven has guilt about the entire thing.

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