Comment on Permission (The Narwhal Returns On The Sea)

1. Jaxx0 on Chapter 2 Sat 12 Feb 2022 06:06AM UTC

   

   I adore this whole concept and fic so far, the writing and interactions between characters is golden and brings out a laugh while also feeding interest
   The scene with Shenhe was a surprise, but a most welcome one. She's adorable and you captured her in those 5 seconds of screentime so nicely, it was both precious and hilarious

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2. 1. SatelliteBlue on Chapter 2 Tue 22 Feb 2022 01:53AM UTC

      

      Thank you! Shenhe will definitely have more appearances from here on, so I'm hoping I can keep her in character. She is adorable but so difficult to write...

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