Comment on Infinity Train: Wake Me Up

  1. 1987TJ on Chapter 4 Sun 06 Mar 2022 04:09PM UTC

    That's a lot of divergences I see. In summary, Blossoming Trail Chloe is replaced with Canon Chloe in this fic.

    I accept the change that Chloe doesn't like demons or horror here, since those traits were Green Phantom Queen's inventions for Blossoming Trail Chloe and Canon Chloe has shown no traits of such. However, I find it a pity that you stated she isn't into writing since her handwriting isn't good, as I find that lonesome people can be creative and imaginative in creating stories.

    Also, I find it ironic that you stated Chloe has a fear of dogs as she has a good relationship with Yamper, who is practically the family dog. I wonder if that means she would freak out if she sets foot on Corginia?

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    1. Exotos135 on Chapter 4 Sun 06 Mar 2022 04:18PM UTC

      She is creative, just in another medium.

      I actually gave her cynophobia to try explain why she was initially distant with Yamper.

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      1. 1987TJ on Chapter 4 Sun 06 Mar 2022 04:31PM UTC

        I can relate to that, as I find I can come up with many ideas, but when it came to putting them into words, I'm usually at a loss as I have trouble thinking of the right words to use.

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        1. Exotos135 on Chapter 4 Sun 06 Mar 2022 05:56PM UTC

          I relate too.

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          1. 1987TJ on Chapter 4 Mon 07 Mar 2022 02:33AM UTC

            One thing I like to note, Akemi was already in a different class (5-B) from Chloe (5-E) back in Blossoming Trail. Also, I'm not surprised you chose to omit Sara, since there was no classmate fitting her description in Canon.

            Also, since you decided to omit the Apex's visit to Azada, I assume that means Lexi never went missing and thus has a much healthier relationship with his father, and if Chloe enters Azada, the relationship between them in Blossoming Trail won't happen, right?

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            1. Exotos135 on Chapter 4 Mon 07 Mar 2022 02:36AM UTC

              She was? Huh, color me shocked.

              To specify, Sara does still exist, she's just homeschooled in this version.

              That sounds about right.

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              1. 1987TJ on Chapter 4 Mon 07 Mar 2022 02:46AM UTC

                Homeschooled? Does that mean she was suspended or expelled for bullying Chloe?

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                1. Exotos135 on Chapter 4 Mon 07 Mar 2022 02:57AM UTC

                  You'll find out soon enough ;)

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