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1. Sb_Ocean on Chapter 2 Sat 21 May 2022 05:13PM UTC

   

   Thanks, I fixed them. It really means a lot to me that people point out what I did wrong so I can approve it. I would be happy to take suggestion of how to improve San's talking if you have any.

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2. 1. Kaeli on Chapter 2 Sun 22 May 2022 06:12PM UTC

      

      I can become a beta reader if you need one. That way I can help with the dialogues and fix any errors.

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   2. 1. Sb_Ocean on Chapter 2 Sun 22 May 2022 06:48PM UTC

         

         Thank you so much I would love that. Would I just have to share the document with you?

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      2. 1. Kaeli on Chapter 2 Mon 23 May 2022 06:28AM UTC

            

            You could share it on google docs with me. Do you have any social media’s I could contact you with?

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         2. 1. Sb_Ocean on Chapter 2 Mon 23 May 2022 03:21PM UTC

               

               What kind of social media site would you have in mind?

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            2. 1. Kaeli on Chapter 2 Mon 23 May 2022 04:16PM UTC

                  

                  Instagram or discord.

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