Comment on end line of our yesterday

  1. kuiperbelts Wed 08 Jun 2022 09:15PM UTC

    Your writing is so unbelievably beautiful, I am so. Weak for this. The way you've captured the care and absolute love in their dynamic has me reeling!!! What a beautiful story, I am so floored...their solidarity in loneliness is so true and something (I feel) is so seldomly touched on mutually. I really love how you've written how comfortable the group is with each other here--it's so believable and full of love, especially for a group of theater kids spending so much time together. I just really, really love how you've captured Nene and Tsukasa's dynamic specifically here, I love how in depth it goes while flowing so beautifully from each scene, thought, and action to the next.

    I think this is one of my new all time favorite prsk fics!! I can't explain it, but I just feel that the care you put into every detail is so tangible. The love and effort you put in resonates so much.

    Thank you for writing something so wonderful and emotionally comforting. I truly can't express how much I just absolutely adore this.

    I feel like it's easy to misconstrue their dynamic but, genuinely, I am just floored by how wonderfully you've portrayed it. I'm in love with this piece. Thank you so much for sharing. :)

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    1. managician Thu 09 Jun 2022 10:26PM UTC

      Karen Kamishiro from Aikatsu Friends. She's smiling at the camera with her hands framing her face.

      Hello, first of all -- thank you for such a lovely comment! I honestly got quite emotional when I first read it, I appreciate your words incredibly!! :'D

      You are right that I don't see many people exploring the parallels between the loneliness all WxS members went through, especially in the case of these two, so one could say I really wanted to shed some light on the matter haha. It's one of the things that drew me to the group dynamic in the first place, and I'm very glad I could make you experience it.

      I always try my best with characterisation and details throughout the narration, so it makes me happy to no end that you enjoyed those aspects in particular, it feels like my effort truly paid off. Tsukasa and Nene's dynamic is very, very dear to me, it's my greatest joy to hear you enjoyed my take on it!!

      Honestly, I'm the one that is floored by how much you got out of my story -- I'm just incredibly happy that you liked it to that point. I will treasure this comment for years to come, thank *you* so much for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts with me! <3

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