Holmes' last line took my breath away XD The physical imagery is thick and rich and I noticed your attention to historical detail. I'm afraid I can't pick out what lines are canon because I've only read the novels thus far.
You have two typos: We widened his nostrils and inhaled. "Do you think I intended to spend then night here?"
ETA: Is there any chance you'll write the anticipated caning? :D :D
Thank you very much for your kind comments and thanks, particularly, for pointing out the typos -- I go blind after a point. As for the ETA -- we'll see.
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