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  1. SeriouslySiri on Chapter 2 Thu 30 Jun 2022 12:57AM UTC

    That opening. When it hits you that it's a dream. Right in the heart. Bravo.

    So happy to see this was updated! And still so so amazingly... Everything. Gladio is still *chef's kiss* and the little details you drop about each of them and their tells and their habits get me every time. Gladio is observant as hell but slower to put the pieces together and you handle his realizations marvelously.

    Also. As someone who makes cakes for a living, I cannot describe the sound I made when I sat here and realted all too well to the feeling of making a frosting leaf, only to have it turn out like a shitty caterpillar.

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    1. SnowshadowAO3 on Chapter 2 Tue 05 Jul 2022 03:22AM UTC

      Oh thank you so much!! I wanted it to become more and more chilling as the dream went on; to hear the realization was impactful is great to hear :)

      Here’s to all of our future cakes having leaves instead of caterpillars 😂!

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