I just binged this whole thing before bed and just wanted to say how much I enjoyed it. The Malibu era is just so lovely. And with the added benefit of time travel?? You’re a blessing. Plus, the way you write Peter is so adult. He doesn’t feel like a teenager, which is refreshing. And the characterizations of Pepper, Rhodey, and particularly Happy are perfect. Happy seems so very three dimensional in this and it just brings life to his character.
Earlier in the work I particularly liked the scene where Tony makes the assumption that MAYBE he slept with a minor in the future. Which, to the reader, is absolutely hilarious. But it also shows a lot about how Tony views himself. And Tony’s insecurity!! That Peter only likes him bc of Mr. Stark or that he cant give Peter everything he deserves. That’s why IM1/IM2 Tony is just such a sweet timeframe for him.
Awww, thank you so much! That particular time is my fav Tony Stark. Too bad it takes some multiverse and time hopping to get them together in it :) I also can't stop getting surprised when someone binges through all of it. It's a lot of words. And it is a really awesome feeling knowing people enjoy it! I will be writing the last chapter and ending this weekend, so you will not have to wait long.
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