hihihihihi hello! the first thing i want to say is uh. apologize for taking so long to respond to this comment. i am but a small child going to preschool and cannot handle the ordeal of being known by those who do not know me
anxiety aside your comment was SO worth the two hours it eventually took me to read it all bit by bit. so genuinely kind and i have never received such in depth feedback before. i felt a lot of fear about posting it because of the subject matter so to get these WORDS...especially being told that i write ghetsis well, it is the highest honor for me thank you so much. as a kinnie i just inserted bits about myself (such as the pacing around for hours at a time, which is how i outlined this entire story) and its validating to me to know that they fit.
that said. i implore you to read the other two chapters if you haven't because the situation changes radically in the third chapter. i say this specifically in reference to your note about neither party being the villain of their relationship. my intention in writing was to make them both detestable people, but the rest of the plot upon chapter 3 relies on colress doing something very bad. i may have misinterpreted that however, i myself suck at reading comprehension despite writing 10 thousand words.
regardless!! your comment made me very very happy and i feel very motivated to continue so thank you so much for reading and taking the time to give me feedback. thank you again
p.s. youre telling me the script thing is CANON? froths at the mouth where is this from. i must know
I’m glad you like my comment! I actually haven’t read the other two chapters yet (I will. i promise) due to me writing my own fics but I’m very excited for what comes after ghetsis’ death!!
I DONT KNOW IF THE SCRIPT IS CANON. I just heard someone talk about how most of his dialogue sticks to a script and he keeps to it even if it doesn’t answer the question being asked and took it as my own headcanon
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