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  1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Sun 07 Aug 2022 07:11PM UTC

    They are one of the healthier ones. If you ignore their relationship was formed from a dominance perspective lol (at least in this work, not sure about the other Blue/E one).

    A lot of others are just abuse of power.

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    1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Sun 07 Aug 2022 07:31PM UTC

      E/Indoraptor is also pretty healthy, at least until Winter began trying to court the Indoraptor.

      Last Edited Sun 07 Aug 2022 07:32PM UTC

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      1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Sun 07 Aug 2022 09:26PM UTC

        True. Winter ruins everything lol

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        1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Sun 07 Aug 2022 09:39PM UTC

          Well one of the biggest reasons Winter wants the Indoraptor is because Bravo left her. So you could say Bravo ruins everything! lol

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          1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Mon 08 Aug 2022 12:34AM UTC

            Lol true. Everyone would be better off if Bravo never existed lol

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            1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Sun 14 Aug 2022 05:03AM UTC

              Well actually everyone would be better off if Bravo wasn't a total asshole. lol

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              1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Sun 14 Aug 2022 09:46PM UTC

                Ooof lol

                You know, when I first wrote Bravo, I envisioned him as a nice guy raptor.

                Nope :,)

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                1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Sun 14 Aug 2022 11:26PM UTC

                  I could see that at the beginning of 'Broken Raptors' as Rust seemed to take the place of the jerk, but once he was gone Bravo replaced him.

                  Hope the next chapter comes out soon as I'm curious as to what Blue and E will do with Winter.

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                  1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Sun 14 Aug 2022 11:47PM UTC

                    I secretly still like E and Rust as mates. I think they'd be fairly okay as a pair if the Indoraptor never popped up. Or at least they seemed to be on even ground when they met again, and there was no hard feelings.

                    Just E being a tease.

                    And in Instincts, I think it was mentioned E was the only raptor that even bothered to spend time with Rust.

                    But I don't even imagine Rust caring about females/breeding in general.

                    He learned from his mistakes.

                    Bravo clearly did not lol

                    Idk what they'd do lol I've yet to write it.

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                    1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Sun 14 Aug 2022 11:59PM UTC

                      Well maybe if Rust has changed he could try to court Winter as they are both lonely. Though Winter would likely not pay him any attention as she wants the Indoraptor.

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                      1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 12:06AM UTC

                        Maybe, but I doubt Winter would get passed Rust being an asshole. He's basically her rapist and she'd probably beat the ever loving tar out of him, assuming he's mellowed down a lot.

                        I could always introduce another raptor pack. I've been wanting to do Rust's story/character development in Broken Raptors where he finds a family pack, and one female systematically murders members of her own family in order to gain alpha status and point the murders towards Rust, who is an outsider and thus wouldn't have the family's trust and loyalty.

                        I figured they'd be named after the Metric system lol

                        But--hey, more pack drama if I introduce them in Instincts.

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                        1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 12:14AM UTC

                          Well Blue and the Indoraptor tolerate each other even after they tried to kill the other (at least in this story) and E doesn't hole any grudges against Rust after he bullied her, scarred her, and kicked her out of the pack. Plus in one chapter it said Winter was presenting herself to ANY male so she may have no other choice than Rust if the Indoraptor stays strong and resists her advances.

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                          1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 12:29AM UTC

                            I feel like E is the glue that keeps the Indoraptor connected to the pack. He basically ignores them unless he absolutely can't lol

                            Poor Indoraptor just wants to live with his raptor wife but the pack thot keeps harassing him lol

                            I have people who ship Storm/Winter. So, there's a little bit of incest right there, too lol

                            But I guess Rust needs a chance at love, too.

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                            1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 12:36AM UTC

                              Well there are 4 males in this pack with only 3 females so someone will always be left out, though currently 3 out of 4 of the males none of the females have any interest in, Storm, Rust, and Bravo.

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                              1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 12:58AM UTC

                                The Indoraptor is a stud, apparently lol

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                                1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 01:02AM UTC

                                  Not to Blue through her eyes are on E.

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                                  1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 01:25AM UTC

                                    If the next chapter has some weird E/Blue/Winter shit, I’d kinda be worried about a triangle developing between them. Or at least some kind of weird fling where Winter keeps wanting to join if she can’t get a male’s attention/sees no male worth her time.

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                                    1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 01:59AM UTC

                                      E already has 2 partners, what's 1 more?

                                      Besides the same problem would come from Indoraptor/E/Winter or Indoraptor/E/Blue

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                                      1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 02:17AM UTC

                                        Uh, potentially two partners too many? Lol

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                                        1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 02:38AM UTC

                                          You mean 1 too many.

                                          Blue/E is great.

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                                          1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 09:38PM UTC

                                            But is it better than Indoraptor/E? Lol

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                                            1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 09:43PM UTC

                                              I think that Indoraptor/E is equal to Blue/E as both cars greatly for E and she cares greatly for them.

                                              Just do Indoraptor/E/Blue and E won't have to think she's a bad made anymore! lol

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                                              1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 10:07PM UTC

                                                I feel like her confusion would only intensify if she's shared lol

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                                                1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 10:10PM UTC

                                                  But, she wouldn't have to feel guilty about 'cheating'. Lol

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                                                  1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 10:22PM UTC

                                                    Lol very true.

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                                                    1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 10:27PM UTC

                                                      Though Winter would be jealous that Blue gets to have fun with the Indoraptor and Bravo would be more pissed than if he finds out about that than Blue/E. Lol

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                                                      1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 10:31PM UTC

                                                        Lol Imagine losing all your potential mates to a genetic freak of a male that grew up in a cage and has poor social skills lol

                                                        If the next chapter has Blue/Winter/E I assume if the Indoraptor pops up, he'd automatically join. After a lot of confusion on what's happening.

                                                        I feel like most of the characters are confused half the time lol

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                                                        1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 11:15PM UTC

                                                          Well there's that unknown female E smelt on Bravo in a prior chapter.

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                                                          1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 11:31PM UTC

                                                            True. It was probably Deci or Centi lol

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                                                            1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Mon 15 Aug 2022 11:52PM UTC

                                                              I'm guessing they were in a different story, sense they have names, right?

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                                                              1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Tue 16 Aug 2022 12:06AM UTC

                                                                I'll maybe introduce them in Broken Raptors with Rust's development. I haven't introduced them, yet, but they're another family pack.

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                                                                1. DinosaurFan88 on Chapter 11 Tue 16 Aug 2022 12:23AM UTC

                                                                  Oh, okay. So they're currently not in any stories yet. Got it.

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                                                                  1. Joelcoxriley on Chapter 11 Tue 16 Aug 2022 12:37AM UTC

                                                                    Correct, friend.

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