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  1. AlphaDino on Chapter 6 Thu 11 Aug 2022 03:09AM UTC

    I was about to add another idea last week but i sorta forgot lol.

    So, I think Sayo and Eve should be a bit more harder to hypnotise because of their strong beliefs. Maybe after what happen in the locker room Arisa and Kasumi realized they are only able to 20% hypnotize them because their mind is fighting back. So they decided to make Sayo and Eve forget about what happen in the locker room so they can catch them off guard later. And when Sayo and Eve woke up again thinking that they passed out because of the heat. So, they continued to change into school swimsuits and go to the pool to swim.

    Later on Aya checked on them in the pool, to check if she was just seeing things, and when she talked to them everything was fine so Aya thought she was hallucinating. But When Aya left both Sayo and Eve became horny because of the mind control side effect and Sayo makeout with Eve and it turn to full sex and their eyes were red but it was only 60%. So basically they were aware they had sex but they don't know why.

    At this moment Poppin Party came back with a lot of "Toys" (vibrators,gags, Ropes etc) to fully hypnotize them and this mind control is more scarier because if everyone else is 100% hypnotized then Sayo and Eve is 1000% hypnotize. They tried to run but were to tired and their bodies were limp so Tae carried them into the locker room and this time around they wont escape. So maybe Rimi and Saya tied up and hypnotized Sayo While Tae, Arisa, and Kasumi was tying up Eve. And when they were done Sayo and Eve was basically having sex again because now the hypnosis is fully effective.

    But unknown to Sayo and Eve, Kasumi has a more sinister plan for them and she left both their personalities intact, because she had a hypnosis device and she wanted to test out on Sayo and Eve. And it was revealed Kokoro was already hypnotized. And in a future chapter the device was put on them while they were tied to a chair but this can be detailed later.

    Notes : I dont know how if there is like an accessory in koikatsu that can look like a mind control device but it does make sense Kasumi would ask kokoro to replicate the hypnosis effect on technology like a headset so they can avoid another Sayo and Eve situation.

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    1. Somamu on Chapter 6 Thu 11 Aug 2022 05:59AM UTC

      I like these! Fun ideas! I don't know how much I want to focus on characters having to be rehypnotized since there's so many to work through, but I do like the idea of more intensive hypnosis as the series goes on. I'll have to see how some of the specifics can be worked in, but I'll try to incorporate as much as I can!

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      1. AlphaDino on Chapter 6 Thu 11 Aug 2022 07:29AM UTC

        Honestly It's just gonna be Eve and Sayo that needs to be rehypnotized because Sayo has strong morals and Eve is trained in Bushido which strengthens the mind, so you could say that them getting rehypnotized is the start of more intensive hypnosis, so in the future they won't have any problems hypnotizing anymore with people who has strong mental strength like Chisato, Yukina,Rui, and Layer.

        Because I do think that there should be at least a small problem that's stopping them from hypnotizing everybody, which is someoene with strong mentality and once that's solved no one can stop them. That and I wanna see Sayo and Eve swimming in the pool before the side effects of hypnosis happens. Because what's scarier than being hypnotized is not knowing you are hypnotized.

        What I'm thinking is that maybe when Aya was about to run she made a noise, and everyone stopped making out with each other, but when Kasumi checked it out there was no one and she thought it was just the wind. And when they were about to continue, Sayo and Eve shook their heads because their mind was fighting it, So Kasumi looked at them once more and told them that they don't remember anything and the last thing they remember is that they fell asleep because of the heat. Arisa and Kasumi left and Arisa complained that they failed but Kasumi smirked and told her that this is good since they have be able to find ways to hypnotize people with strong minds like Sayo and Eve and this time she is going to invite everyone in popipa and bring a lot of 'toys'. When Sayo and Eve woke up they immidiately changed into the school swimsuit but everytime they see each other they slowly become lustful.

        And it would be funny as well when Aya is running, she tripped and passed out (Aya moment) and when she woke up she was with Kanon (who wasn't hypnotized) and when they went to visit Sayo and Eve, Aya was dumbfounded that they were okay, and she just laughed and thought it a dream, but minutes after she left Sayo and Eve immidiately had sex (side effect of minor hypnosis) and not long after Popipa waited for them to finished, tied them up and brought them to the locker room for a more effective hypnosis. And after Popipa fully hypnotized them, They realize they went overkill because it was to effective and Sayo and Eve were in a daze but Kasumi wasn't done because they were gonna test out new methods with Sayo and Eve soon. But since they were fully hypnotized Kasumi and ordered them to continue making out with each other and Eve straddled Sayo and make the hypnosis even deeper.

        As for a hypnotizing machine or technology, you probably make it so that the glasses can duplicate for a short amount of time since a lot of people have been hypnotized, and instead the function of those glasses is that the wearer gets hypnotized.

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        1. Ace111 (Guest) on Chapter 6 Thu 11 Aug 2022 06:04PM UTC

          I agree with this idea actually. In every good story there should be at least a minor problem that needs to be solved, in this case people who have strong mental strength. I like the idea that there are people that can actually resist the hypnosis and requires multiple hypnosis attempts. I also think that this would be a good way for popipa to start trying to do more intense hypnosis methods so they can be prepared next time. If I were a student in this story, I'd be terrified to see someone like Sayo who has great mental strength easily hypnotized, I'd honestly just run or give up.

          I also like the idea of side effects of the minor hypnosis like slowly building up lust and as the comment above said, it's terrifying not knowing you are hypnotized.

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          1. Somamu on Chapter 6 Thu 11 Aug 2022 11:43PM UTC

            Good ideas and points from both of you! I'll definitely be keeping them in mind as I plan out upcoming chapters. Thank you both, and feel free to send in any other ideas, suggestions, or critiques!

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            1. Ace111 (Guest) on Chapter 6 Fri 12 Aug 2022 10:47AM UTC

              I wanted to comment to give ideas but didn't know what, but when I saw AlphaDino's comment I just became excited because of the horror points in it :

              -Kasumi and Arisa failed to fully hypnotised Sayo and Eve, so she decided to hypnotised them slowly to test new methods.
              -Sayo and Eve woke up and just continued to change into their swimuits, but they are actually hypnotised.
              -Aya visits them swimming and thought it was just a dream because their fine.
              -Side effect of hypnosis kicks in, Sayo and Eve get super horny and eventually has sex which deepens the hypnosis.
              -Popipa takes advantage of them not being able to move after sex and bring them to a locker room.
              -Popipa has a group sex with Sayo and Eve, and it was so intense that it became overkill the hypnosis effect becomes 500%.
              -Kasumi orders them to continue to even deepen the hypnosis.
              -Sayo and Eve becomes Kasumi's test subject for even intense hypnosis in the future.

              I just love plots like this where the villain decides to actually takes things super seriously. And poor Sayo and Eve becomes Kasumi's intense hypnosis test subjects in the future.

              But If I may add my few requests,

              1.Since Kasumi decided to intense the hypnosis, maybe use the old hypnosis effect. So maybe the red eyes are for like standard hypnosis but the old hypnosis effect is for the more intense hypnosis. So red eyes effect : Dangerous, Old eyes effect : Super Dangerous. So like if the red eyes amplify the persons personality, the old eyes completely rewrites the persons personality so they obey every command. But I feel like it doesn't make sense to use the old eyes so I leave it to you.

              2. Can you make it so that Aya and Kanon are going to help the gymnastic clubs. Because she is good at dancing and flexible (Idol) so she was ask to help out and another reason is that the gym has AC while Kanon just wants to help. And I know that there are leotard options for Koikatsu. And maybe in the middle of practice Kanon got called into a classroom and then when Aya visited the classroom because Kanon didn't return and find out that popipa is hypnotizing her and Aya gets pulled into the classroom and becomes the next victim. And obviously this can wait until the Sayo and Eve arc finish because I do also wanna see Eve and Sayo become Kasumi's victim of intense hypnosis.

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              1. Somamu on Chapter 6 Sun 14 Aug 2022 01:09AM UTC

                I'll add all this to the growing list of ideas! I do like the idea of having different types of hypnotic effects as the fic goes on, and leotards are always cute!

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