Comment on the way we undo our tragedies

  1. A very nice development of the universe, I like the melancholic atmosphere that in the chapter! Everything is fine but we know/feel that it won't last! I can't wait for chapter 3, everyone should stay alive and as happy as possible!

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    1. I wanted some cute family scenes so the readers can put a personality and name to these little children. Chapter 3? "stay alive and as happy as possible" ...

      Thanks for reading this story. Let's see if your predication are true.

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      1. It works well!
        I would like to believe my predictions unfortunately I feel that someone is going to die :(

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        1. Time for me to pick who Madara SI is screaming about

          Last Edited Sun 14 Aug 2022 07:50AM UTC

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          1. I'm going to get the tissue...

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            1. Chapter 2 title: "He was a child who learned how to walk!"

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              1. They are all so small.... Why :(

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                1. I forgot to add this work to 'Burn' series but the 'Burn' series is a spin-off of 'To The Pyre' series. I guess for a while, I'll keep them separated so people don't feel tormented.

                  Violence and trauma and free suffering is in both series' package XD

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                  1. Everything is connected ! Thanks for the information !

                    Perfect ! xD I really need to invest in a tissue factory!

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                    1. undo our tragedies has Hashirama with Butsuma's temper and that's part of why the river confrontation is not the same. This Madara is different in another way however...

                      I can't thank you enough for being so invested in these series LOL

                      Last Edited Sun 14 Aug 2022 05:36PM UTC

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                      1. The smallest changes lead to the biggest upheavals!

                        Thank you for writing it! It is very interesting to follow!

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                        1. You're welcome! And thank you. I usually don't write these kinds of fanfics, so it's nice for me to see people like this level of angst lol

                          I keep having so many ideas, I might as well write them to get them out of my head haha

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                          1. Good angst stories are rare to find so I'm especially happy to read yours! Also, I really like your interpretation of the characters so it's a goldmine!

                            I can not wait to see it ! Remember to rest too xD

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                            1. Good to know my angst makes some people happy haha! I have a few particular views of interpretations and it's always great to find someone amiable to these views.

                              I'll rest one day xD once I stop juggling so many WIPs... Most of my active ones are all HashiMada oops

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                              1. Yes, it's fascinating to see these different points of view!

                                Good luck with all your stories in this case! (Out of curiosity if you don't mind what are the non hashimada stories you write, is it also about Naruto?)

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                                1. It is!

                                  Thanks for the luck (I write in the Narutoverse 99.99% of the time. The rest are outliers from other fandoms.)

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