I like that there is no big reveal about their break-up, not some bog drama but only two people who didn't know how to communicate anymore. It felt very real.
“Hi.” Even said, almost shyly, when he joined Isak at the counter. It was endearing to Isak, as Even never used to be the shy one. Their relationship had changed over time, certainly. And it wasn’t like Isak didn’t feel slightly intimidated by it all as well, the whole situation… but his thoughts and desires had led him there that night and there was nothing he could have done about it. I loved that too, this idea of their dynamic shifting over time. Even suddenly being the shy one in front of Isak when he seemed like so confident when they met.
"I like that there is no big reveal about their break-up, not some bog drama but only two people who didn't know how to communicate anymore. It felt very real."
And that was exactly the intention. :) So happy that people enjoy it.
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