o god. I was OP but I was scared to read this when I saw it and oh god, it hurts.
He remembers the feel of her skin beneath the pads of his fingers, the touch of his lips against hers, the way her mouth would open, letting him in and giving full access to her… // He can feel his nails digging into the palms of his hands. He`s certain his nails will crack his skin wide open any second and blood will start dripping down the sides of his hands. ---- you make this so visceral, and it feels so important to have these direct physical sensations for what Neo is feeling when Trinity is so distanced from him by both the monitors and her identity as Tiffany.
He loves her so much that he can`t even express it with words, so he moves for her and to her and because of her, until all he hears are her moans and gasps yelps and then nothing when she finally arches her back and comes all around him. ---- this is SO sweet and such a contrast with the indifference and lack of communication Neo sees happening between Tiff and Chad ;________;
I'm so struck by Tiff's lack of reaction at the end - it reminds me VERY MUCH of her non-reaction when Chad takes her morning bun (a scene with so many painful sexual implications, god, he does it right in front of Thomas too, I'm still angry about this). Neo's intuition that she's checking for a text from Thomas...aughhhhh that hurts but the way their attention is so hooked in to each other no matter what is happening... 'Thomas isn't coming' this is so powerful in the repetition, he's coming from his real self to find her ;__________; brb watching the end of M4 again to make up for this
anyway thank you SO much for bringing my horrible prompt to life, I will have to give good things to the babies to make up for it. Hmu me if you wanna join us in the Discord where we talk about the kink meme and stuff, you can ping me at thene#0121 there.
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