So good so far! You really know how to write a great captivating start to a story and I'm excited to see where this goes.
Something tells me that Cait is gonna have to show Vi her weaknesses by kicking her butt a bit in the ring. Maybe then Vi will listen to her but it'll be rough going at first I think. Letting Vi lose her first match with Cait as her coach may be one of the only ways Cait will get through to Vi and have Vi listen to her coaching. But it will suck in the meantime because Vi seems like the type to get pissed off and sulk a bit when she loses.
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JeniseCullen on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Sep 2022 07:38PM UTC
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