Oh I LOVE the direction this is going in! I love how you can see what's coming and are powerless to stop it. Tsukasa you are a person to be taken care of too!!!
I also like how the chapters are connected. Most 5+1 stories are separate happenings, but this one seems like one coherent plot, which is fun. I really like your characterization of wxs, they're all so fun to read and realistic. I'm excited for the next chapter, whenever it should come. :)
edit: ah i see it is no longer a 5+1, but the compliment still stands hehe
The first draft of this story with its bare ideas really did turn out to be a regular 5 + 1, but then when I went in and started fleshing everything out, it morphed into a story with a whole connected plot. So I ended up changing it in the second chapter here as I noticed they weren't separate happenings after all 😭
WxS never fails to cheer me up when I see them in game. I love this group of goofy-goobers. I too hope Tsukasa can see what the others around him are seeing!! Thank you <3 I wasn't sure if the change in direction would be liked but I see it turned out alright!
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Gummysaur on Chapter 2 Wed 28 Sep 2022 01:32PM UTC
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