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  1. tired_ace29 on Chapter 2 Sat 29 Oct 2022 01:39PM UTC

    Oh boiii.
    That was an awesome read. Am I coming back for more? Definitely. Do I care if it'll take another year for chapter 3? No. If it does I'll just re-read the entire thing and Continue because this is wayyy too awesome. All the little parts, everything felt like straight out of season 4 (but different obviously) I AM ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE. All the pieces you added, like the skylor's thoughts about the ninjas and their descriptions that Kai gave. Incredible, thank you so much for this

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    1. grungekitty77 on Chapter 2 Sun 06 Nov 2022 07:29PM UTC

      I'm so gappy you liked it it. It was a balancing act to include enough of the show to be recognizable, but not so much it got redundant.

      Skylor's thoughts was actually the last scene I added. I needed to break that place up with something else. I had debated doing a Chen and Clouse scene, but I wanted to set something up with Skylor instead, and honestly? I liked that better. It turned out really short, but they can't all be super long, and looking at the word count, maybe a few short scenes wouldn't be too awful.

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