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  1. *flappy hands* hdjsjbxjakkss thank youuuu 😭😭😭

    I'm really glad Beryl's mom friend anxiety (idk what else to call it) came accross the way i intended, also i'm realizing i accidentally wrote their relationship as kind of unhealthy oops - i know as a really anxious person i'd fucking DIE if i felt like i constantly had to keep my partner from getting into dangerous situations

    also it's kinda like that fucking meme i made this morning of "rational person with all the braincells" vs "absolute agent of chaos" lmao

    (No comment on me canonizing that our dear captain has mommy issues? No? Okay 🤪)

    One last thing: i'm kinda sad no one noticed how i used that song lyric as a play on their classes "you kept me like a secret but i kept you like an oath" 'cause paladins have oaths but oath of treachery isn't really an oath but also like remeny was the one who wanted to keep it a secret... Maybe it's not as clever as i thought lmao but i did feel like i was having a big brain moment when i thought of it

    Last Edited Wed 02 Nov 2022 02:29AM UTC

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    1. Oh dang the lyrics!!! I-- wow that's good.
      Also don't worry about canonizing stuff: this is fanfic nothing is technically canon lol

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      1. Yeah i guess this is more of a personal headcanon (which this fic is full of)

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