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  1. CecilRivers on Chapter 1 Thu 24 Nov 2022 11:12PM UTC

    Don't know why I never commented. This was a FANTASTIC first chapter, blowing HF's first chapter out of the water. I loved every second, and I think you used the park extremely well. There's SO MUCH POTENTIAL with this park, and in only one chapter you showed off what it's capable of. Kyogre and Groudon were VERY well-written, and I look forward to seeing what you do with Talia the dryad. Rena's character wasn't fleshed-out until many chapters later, so I look forward to seeing what kind of character Talia becomes.

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    1. Anonymous Creator on Chapter 1 Fri 25 Nov 2022 06:57PM UTC

      Thank you very much, again! I really enjoyed writing these versions of Kyogre and Groudon, and I'm glad my first chapter was able to knock it of the park! Er... Anyway, I'm happy to know you're looking forward to seeing Talia develop, too.

      You comment was timely; I finished a draft for a new chapter today. If editing and Real Life things go smoothly, it should be up should be up in a day or two.

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      1. CecilRivers on Chapter 1 Mon 28 Nov 2022 01:04PM UTC

        Sounds fantastic! I look forward to reading it!

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