Hello author I've been quite in the coments but I've been following this series for quite a while. I really enjoy your story pacing charachterisation and this was really satysfying. I dunno If you take critique but One thing I feel like could have been done better was doing more description of what the charachters are feeling their body language expressions etc It could be more fleshed out to create a sense of tension and drama along with dialogue.
Let me know If you're not fine with receving this kind of comments I am not going to do that again but I can delete this If you want. Good luck with next chapters . I love your story ;> Greetings from Poland :>
Thank you so much for commenting and I'm happy to know you enjoyed the story!! I love all kinds of comments, that includes critiques (since those help me improve^^), and thank you for leaving me your opinion. I've actually been toning it down because I often feel like I tend to overdo it (at least in most of my unpublished works), but I'll keep your comment in mind. Have a great day :))
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