Great job with the story so far, is interesting to see how an adopted Bibi and Mizuki would be like if they were not separated and were adopted by Date, first time seeing it too on ao3. Makes me wonder how this family will work if it ever does reach the Cyclops killings plot. I mean having Hitomi and Iris join in the family would be something that I have seen in some fanfics, always found it rather cute.
Find the story so far to be pretty good with it being the girls being raised in a rather not kind upbringing and how it affects their personality and relationships, so far Date is having more snark with Bibi than I expected, but at the same time makes me laugh as it does feel like a 12 year old Mizuki. Makes me wonder how much they will change when the sisters grow older.
Overall, fun read, is a smooth read through the whole thing so it was rather pleasant to read with how you structured it. Wonder how and when the pairings you have tagged with happen in the future, I mean in a way it feels like a mystery of sorts, like how does it even get there to begin with, with what you have tagged. Guess I'll find out as you put out chapters when you got time to write them.
Don't worry, I have ideas >:) For both things you wonder. The pairings I have a course for, and the Cyclops mystery (even the HB killings too.) There's a little free form to this, but I have a rough outline I'm tracking.
I hope you continue to have fun. That's always my goal is for those who chose to read my writings to have fun. I definitely tagged out of an abundance of caution and update the best I can.
Thank you for the generous comment, and hope I can keep you interested :)
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Rook55 on Chapter 3 Fri 06 Jan 2023 01:35AM UTC
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