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  1. rosey_angel on Chapter 1 Tue 10 Jan 2023 04:27AM UTC

    i really love this!
    - Sam grimaced, tilting her head back and peering through the leaves. There was a bug directly above her, scooching along a particularly thick branch. Ants made their way along another. And she was fairly certain that something was crawling up her left leg. She drew her knee upwards, hoping to swat whatever it was away with her fingertips, but the look on the Colonel’s face stopped her.
    - - you describe the scene so perfectly! it's wonderful

    - Brushing dirt and dead leaves off her butt and thighs, she hazarded a glance at Daniel. Of course, his keen blue eyes gleamed back at her with a hefty amount of rank speculation.
    “So?” The corner of his mouth jerked upwards. “What were you two doing in there?”
    - - of course daniel would mock her for this haha!

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    1. Akamaimom on Chapter 1 Tue 10 Jan 2023 04:55PM UTC

      I've always thought that Daniel knew exactly what was going on. He's not stupid. ;) Thank you for the kind comment! :)

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