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1. myheadisnotbig on Chapter 3 Sat 11 Feb 2023 04:11AM UTC

   

   Glad you're enjoying it. Anything you'd like to critique or request? :)

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2. 1. Jam5 on Chapter 3 Sat 11 Feb 2023 04:41AM UTC

      

      I'd love it if you could show us the story through Billy's eyes or Mary's.

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   2. 1. myheadisnotbig on Chapter 3 Sat 11 Feb 2023 05:49AM UTC

         

         I may experiment with writing in first-person in the future, thanks for the suggestion! It's quite the challenge though, capturing it in something that feels natural. My life is very boring in comparison lol

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