Its purpose served, the string of magic energy anchoring their souls together faded back to nothingness. Concern for the injured animal overcame the prince so forcefully and gripped his heart so tightly that the sudden absence of his mysterious guiding force went completely unnoticed. --- I was already liking this story but this paragraph right here had a great bit hook at the end and I am now well and truly... well hooked. 😁
I love him calling him Sir Raven.
Then, because the universe hated him and wanted nothing more than to see him suffer, his stranger began to sing. Kim melted as the words flowed forward, until he resembled more of a puddle than a corvid where he lay on the sun-warm wooden table. ❤️
Kim cocked his head in the other direction and fluffed his plumage, because that’s really all he could do to convey the mixture of possessiveness and mortification filling him from tip to tail-feather. ❤️
There was no way in the seven realms he’d be going back to Faerieland anytime soon. Not alone, anyway. -- and this... well this was just kind of mean cause now I have to wait.
Your world building is great. I look forward to more. Thank you for sharing!
Can you hear me sobbing from wherever you are??? This was so kind and detailed and it made me smile like a total dingus for 5 full minutes. I had to shake MY plumage to calm down and reply. Thank you so much <3 <3 I can't wait to hear your opinions on the next chapter!
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