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1. PlumeDeChien on Chapter 2 Sat 29 Apr 2023 09:51PM UTC

   

   Thank you very much for pointing those ones out. I corrected them. I read my chapters several times before posting them, unfortunately I still miss some things.

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2. 1. Unicorn7 on Chapter 2 Sun 30 Apr 2023 12:44AM UTC

      

      That's ok. I could figure out what you wanted to say.

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