Comment on Appreciation For Honesty

1. ZekeStrife on Chapter 1 Thu 09 Jun 2016 10:04PM UTC

   

   ♥♥♥♥
   i love this so much, Amb; it's sooo good.
   just, Papyrus eating alone, and Sans not even telling him he's going out to Grillby's and
   [Sans smiling, looking the closest to happy he’s been since then. That last time, he was visibly disappointed when Papyrus showed up to bring him home.]
   that line is such a gut punch man, just. Pap noticing that Sans is disappointed, and deciding against picking him up and
   [After all, he knows his brother can take care of himself.]
   that is such a good line, because it's just a tiny bit salty- a tiny bit hurt.

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2. 1. GoldenDusk on Chapter 1 Fri 10 Jun 2016 03:28AM UTC

      

      W-wow, thank you so much o\\\o
      Your observations are great - that's exactly what I intended with those lines :D

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   2. ConcoctionsFromHell on Chapter 1 Fri 02 Sep 2016 02:44AM UTC

      

      *screeches* AAAAAAAA ITS YOU

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