Comment on Diamonds Fall and Fates Change

1. Axhes on Chapter 1 Thu 08 Jun 2023 10:08AM UTC

   

   I hope that you write Whiteout less as if Darkstalker not hatching her prematurely meant she acted as such. I mean I can hope.. right? Lol

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2. 1. FaboKraken on Chapter 1 Thu 08 Jun 2023 09:13PM UTC

      

      Oh defintely, I could not stand how that was treated, it read very weird

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