Thanks :) I have realized there is definitely a different feel to writing each character's point of view. Daud is calculating, somewhat amoral and self-interested, but with a hint of tiredness... like any blue-collar. Corvo is intelligent still, but lighter, a bit of a realist, but also a bit of a bleeding heart... far more emotion-inclined, more sad than angry. The Outsider... was... observant. Mysanthropic and nearly nihilistic, albeit aloof. His monologues in-game were always dramatic, so when writing him... poetic freewriting was the vibe that felt right. The degree of self-deprecation... also seemed correct; for my plot at least. He strikes me as beautifully tragic.
The efficiency of Daud is very pleasing to the eye. I really like this relaxed and factual atmosphere, which may be a bit frivolous or overly confident. I really like the content in which Colvo allows Emily to make her own choices, but I'm curious. How could Lady Emily choose such a plan? Although there are basically no more comprehensive answers than those given by the waking lives in the past world. I also really like the theme of The Outsider. The natural beauty revealed by his current animal form has an interesting contrast with past human thinking. After watching so many things, he should actually relax and be a happy little winged animal .(mosquito: call me?)
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