Oh, that was a perfect ending! I loved reading about their Christmas, it was so heartwarming to see them all back together! And then when Lucy relayed Erin's threat…I had figured something like that might happen to Lucy or Edmund in this chapter, but my heart still just sank. But through the whole scene in the government office, I was getting more and more excited that the adoption would work, and then the form got stamped! And I was absolutely grinning so much; this story is so good at yanking my emotions around in the best way. And the ending! It was so hopeful and had the perfect amount of open-endedness to make it both a satisfying ending to this story and an intriguing beginning to their possible future adventures. Also, the detail you put into the original characters and their names was absolutely brilliant, I love all the care put into this fic; it's an amazing read. Thank you for writing, I'm definitely going to reread this a lot!
thank you so much for reading and for all your kind comments <3 they were SUCH a big motivator in keeping me writing, I really can't thank you enough! and i'm very glad you liked the ending I was worried some people might find it annoying :)
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