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  1. Carib0u on Chapter 1 Thu 03 Aug 2023 02:44AM UTC

    I love Hermione saves Harry stories (as can be seen from my own!)

    This looks to be short but that's often good. If someone ever finds themselves padding out a story to include events and descriptions an average reader could fill in, they should try making things shorter (like this) and see if it works.

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    1. ScribblingSteve on Chapter 1 Thu 03 Aug 2023 11:45AM UTC

      Thanks! This isn't going to end up as short as I intended it to be, though. I have problems with that. :)

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