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  1. Alright. Action is getting started finally.

    My only gripe is that the chapters are too short and so little happens in each chapter.

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    1. Thank you Erfan. I appreciate your feedback. Rhis is a rewrite of the story that I had on wattpad, and that's why the chapters are somewhat shorter. I will take your advice though, because I think it makes a lot of sense. How many words is ideal?

      Last Edited Sat 05 Aug 2023 08:20AM UTC

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      1. Well, I'm not a fanfic writer, but something atleast about double of this current amount I think would be much better.

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        1. Ok, the next chapters will be longer 😄. Thanks for following the fanfic, I really appreciate it. Right now you seem to be the only one 😅.

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